Talk:Harry Patch (In Memory Of)/GA1

GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


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 * "as a charity download single" perhaps "as a downloadable single for charity". I'm not sure charity should be used as an adjective here.
 * Done, I reworded download as downloadable and removed the word charity altogether as it becomes clear later in the same sentence that the proceeds were donated to charity.


 * "sold for £1 from the band's website" wikilink the £. Same with $.
 * Done


 * "and a string part" part? try and reword.
 * Done


 * "The song consists of Thom Yorke's singing and a string part arranged by band member Jonny Greenwood." Seems a little weird that you mention that Greenwood is a band member, but not Yorke.
 * Done


 * "from quotes from Patch" avoid using "from" twise back to back.
 * Done, reworded to "by"


 * "Radiohead's online store W.A.S.T.E. as" shouldn't have an external link in the middle of prose. Drewcifer (talk) 06:51, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Done. --Brandt Luke Zorn (talk) 21:03, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

GA Passed Very nice article, clearly up to GA standards. For further improvements, I would suggest expanding the article wherever you can, specifically with data concerning the song's commercial/charitable success. And of course, I'd urge everyone involved with getting the article to this point to consider contributing to the GA review process as well. Drewcifer (talk) 05:30, 26 August 2009 (UTC)