Talk:Harry Somers

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198.102.153.2 (talk) 20:50, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

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Proper language
“He began working with thinner textures, developed a more horizontally orientated approach to his pieces and established control over motivic coherence.”

orientated? How about oriented? Signinstranger (talk) 17:44, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

Tone of writing
Needs to be heavily edited with better copywriting as most statements sound like they were written by a fan or someone who is promoting him Intuivo (talk) 07:21, 26 July 2023 (UTC)