Talk:Haruka Shimazaki

Paragraph consolidation
I consolidated the many single-sentence paragraphs & sub-section. Another editor reverted the edit in good faith, and I in turn un-did that. I felt the editor's reversion was a mistake. By way of reason, the editor wrote in the summary that my edit was "unreadable" and it doesn't "encourage expansion". This hyperbole is not necessary. There was nothing "unreadable" about it; I left the grammar in decent condition. The content was the same. And there is nothing that encourages or discourages expansion. An editor can expand or not. But, as we are mainly policy-driven around here, I will submit the MOS:PARAGRAPHS for consideration, which discourages single-sentence paragraphs. Boneyard90 (talk) 20:17, 5 June 2013 (UTC)