Talk:Harvard Extension School/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 22:05, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 22:05, 4 April 2016 (UTC)

This a very well-worded article! I have just a few concerns that I have listed below:

Lead

 * Please put Ref #6 at the end of the sentence as it looks kind of awkward where it is currently placed
 * Done.

History

 * You list "early faculty", but many of them are in red links; why should they be listed when they aren't necessarily notable, considering they don't have Wikipedia articles?
 * I removed all the redlinks.
 * Who described the Extension classes as "surprisingly affordable"?
 * It was Fodor's, but I am not sure why this one clause in the whole article was singled out. Even the very next clause is cited by not attributed in text.

Deans

 * There are no sources at all for this section
 * Done.

Distance education

 * The 'Today' section starts with "As of 2014..."; does this still apply to 2016, the current year? If so, current-ize this section so it is up-to-date
 * I'm not sure, so I changed the heading from "Today" to "Modern"

Academic requirements

 * I would add "strict" before "GPA requirements."
 * Done.

Alumni

 * The notes in parentheses look out of place to me; there must be some way that you could explain this in the section itself instead of creating footnotes, yes?
 * This screwed with the placement of the references a little, but I think I made it work.

Notable alumni

 * The last sentence in this section's third paragraph doesn't make sense to me
 * I broke it up. Hope this clarifies things.

End of GA Review:
Like I said, a very strong article, but I do have a few concerns. Let me know once you've finished with this, I shall put it on hold for seven days. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 16:46, 17 April 2016 (UTC)

You there? Almost a week has passed. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:09, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Carbrera, Sainsf, BrianCUA rarely edits on weekends. It would be nice if you could give him at least another day or two to respond. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:20, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I would request Carbrera to wait for three days. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:23, 24 April 2016 (UTC)


 * I am sorry. I have been away.  Give me another day or two and I will finish this up.  thanks.  --BrianCUA (talk) 03:13, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I've made all the corrections. Thanks for the effort, and your patience!  --BrianCUA (talk) 19:44, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
 * So sorry, I have not noticed this message until now. I have read through the article again and will now pass it. Please do not apologize for your absence, as I can now say I have done the same. It was a pleasure to work with you. Cheers! Carbrera (talk) 01:39, 30 April 2016 (UTC)