Talk:Hasdrubal, son of Hanno/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:21, 28 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Link city state in the lead?
 * Done.


 * Probably needs a hatnote to Hasdrubal. None of the others are known as the "son of Hanno", but since there's so many with this name, the hatnote would probably be helpful.
 * You have gone technical here. I am but an ignorant content creator and do not always understand terminology.


 * " the Romans turned to fight - Optional - I know we have different ideas about MOS EGG, so this one's optional. I'm just thinking maybe this whole phrase should be linked, although that's mostly because when I saw "turned to flight" linked, I assumed the link was to rout.  I can see either side of this one, so I guess I'm just really thinking out loud here
 * Done.


 * "and were joined by third general, Hamilcar," - by a third general
 * Done.

Through Battle of Tunis, I'll finish this off later. Hog Farm Bacon 01:54, 28 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "Henceforth the Carthaginian approach was purely defensive,[91] The war ended nine years later in 241 BC with a Roman victory" - I'm assuming that the comma is supposed to be a full stop.
 * Aging eyesight. Fixed.


 * Refs in alphabetical order: you go Tipps, Walbank, Tipps, Walbank
 * The alphabet doesn't work like that where you live? Fixed.


 * Google is misspelled in the Warmington ref
 * All Google links removed.

The references all look reliable, and the image licensing looks acceptable. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Bacon 18:45, 28 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Hi, swift work, thank you. Your comments all addressed above. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:42, 30 August 2020 (UTC)