Talk:Hasil Adkins/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 20:24, 23 May 2014 (UTC)

I have seen this article has been nominated for 46 days. It looks great with some minor problems mostly aimed at the tone and the Well Written criteria. Happy editing,  TheQ Editor      (Talk) 20:24, 23 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking this on, ! It's a busy Memorial Day weekend for me, but I should be able to tackle this piece by piece over the next few days. &mdash; MusikAnimal talk 22:23, 23 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I have another busy week ahead... you may see me doing RCP work or other simple tasks. However copy editing and research takes dedicated time and undivided attention, so I may not get to issues involving tone until as late as Thursday (5/59). Just wanted to let you know that addressing these GA concerns is in fact a priority. Thank you for your patience! &mdash; MusikAnimal talk 14:31, 27 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Ignore my last ping. Turns out time was on my side. Hopefully I've done a fair job at addressing the outlined issues, specifically the NPOV section. Thanks for the help! &mdash; MusikAnimal talk 03:57, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

Review

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: