Talk:Haskelite/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:31, 4 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * "Michigan based" - Should be hyphenated
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:45, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Can you add conversion templates for the distances in the article?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:53, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "brand trade name of "haskelite."" - Be consistent with the capitalization of Haskelite
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:02, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "There was no ribs used in the building of the canoe." - Were, not was
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * " In 1927 the company" - I think there should be a comma after 1927
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

I think it should be between construction and was
 * "A Haskelite specialty plywood designed for aircraft construction was invented in 1939 called Duramold" - "called Duramold" is a misplace modifier,
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:38, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Link formaldehyde and phenol
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:41, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "Howard Hughs" - The standard spelling is Howard Hughes, use the standard spelling
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:03, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "It's top speed" - remove the '
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

2.
 * Publisher should be added for the Kane and Motor Body refs
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:50, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Add publisher locations when known
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:04, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

3.
 * Lead's a little short, but it's a short article, so I'd say it's sufficient
 * ✅ - expanded. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:09, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

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7.
 * Should this really be in Category:Adhesives? It's made from adhesives, but it's not an adhesive itself.
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 00:49, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
 * All issues addressed. Can you take another look now. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:12, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I added another conversion template for the temperature. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 16:20, 5 May 2020 (UTC)