Talk:Hasta la Raíz (song)/GA1

GA Review
Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:56, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * An alt needs to be provided for the cover image
 * Stay consistent with your format of the flatlists
 * Remove the red links for "Nunca es Suficiente" and "Lo Que Construimos"

Paragraph 1

 * State that "Down to the Root" in English, like "(English: Down to the Root)"
 * Add ", recorded for her studio album, Hasta la Raíz (2015)."

Paragraph 2

 * Expand this paragraph

Background

 * The first sentence is kind of long, but I don't really see how you could shorten it
 * Remove '(Mexico)'; it's not necessary in the context
 * Change 'seven' to 'six' years

Paragraph 1

 * Link 'Mexico'
 * The sentence that starts with "While recording demos..." is too long and includes too many clauses

Paragraph 2

 * The lead sentence could be shortened; you don't have to include how they became friends during the recording process
 * Add an author to the Billboard source if available

Critical and commercial reception

 * Separate these into two separate paragraphs; one for critical reception and another for commercial reception

Paragraph 1

 * Change the lead sentence to "Upon its release, "Hasta la Raíz" received positive reviews from music critics."
 * Change 'coincident' to 'in agreement'

Paragraph 2

 * Remove the link to "Nunca Es Suficiente"
 * Move each source in the second sentence to its respective statement (after each comma)

Music video

 * Try adding a photo of the music video
 * Perhaps, add a small description of the music video as well

Track listing

 * Remove the 'Writer(s)' and 'Producer(s)' section in the track listing; you've already labeled this information in the infobox above

Credits and personnel

 * Remove the ';' from each credit
 * Use proper n dashes instead of hyphens

End of GA Review:
Another good article, but definitely needs some work before passing GA status. I will put the article on hold until problems and addressed and corrections are made. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:27, 5 March 2016 (UTC).