Talk:Hatlestad Slide/to do

*Several sections are too short and should be lengthened or reorganized into larger sections.
 * This is a direct translation of the article on the Norwegian Wikipedia. I feel it has a very 'translated'/'foreign' sound to it, and I'd appreciate it if it was made to 'sound more English'.
 * Many Several two one claim in the article still requires sources.
 * Most existing sources cited are in Norwegian. Finding English sources would greatly improve the article.
 * I [Safe-Keeper] personally know a survivor of the slide and thus can not claim to be objective. Please read the article with a critical eye and determine if it needs editing in this respect. I personally feel that it currently is too condemning in its wording.
 * The article needs pictures. If you have pictures that can be legally uploaded, please submit them.

*The list of indirect causes should be made into a paragraph of regular text.

*Things not covered by article:
 * Compensation of municipalities.
 * Controversy regarding municipal purchase and demolition of H.T. housing units.
 * The exact number of people displaced should be added, replacing 'many more'.