Talk:Hattie M. Strong

feedback
Hi I have some recommendations for you regarding how to proceed with improving this article--
 * I think the layout could be restructured. Biographies tend to start with someone's early life and proceed chronologically from there. It's a bit counterintuitive that you start with her death.
 * Somewhat related to that, if you do keep the personal life section, I don't think death is generally included in that. Your options would be to split the sections (Later life and death; personal life) or to retitle the section (Personal life and death)
 * looks like this could be beefed up a bit. I found a couple of good references that I think could be really helpful
 * very nice secondary ref
 * info on death date and place as well as interment information
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Let me know if you have questions or need assistance! What you have is good so far, but I think it could be rearranged somewhat and expanded. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:00, 19 March 2019 (UTC)

Hi Thanks! I've greatly expanded the page, but still have some more to do. SereneProf (talk) 17:23, 26 March 2019 (UTC)SereneProf