Talk:Haven (Star Trek: The Next Generation)/GA1

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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 06:48, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

You know how this works, so i'll just get straight into it now, thanks!  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  06:48, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

" the filmed version" Is this referring to the regular version, if so, why call it the "filmed" version?
 * Urgh - that should have been final version. I've amended it. Miyagawa (talk) 22:36, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

Plot section ends a bit abruptly, could you add something to make it clear this is the end of the epiosode?
 * Added some further detail earlier on in the plot and stated that the Tarellian vessel departed the system. Miyagawa (talk) 22:36, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

First two sentences of production section don't link very well, and are a bit confusing. I think the second sentence seems a bit out of place, could you rewrite this section?
 * Rejigged the first paragraph - changed the sentence order a little and reworded a couple of parts. I think it flows better now. Miyagawa (talk) 22:42, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

Passed the article, thanks Miyagawa  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  05:18, 1 March 2013 (UTC)