Talk:Hay Castle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:45, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

I will review this one. Comments to follow over the next few days. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 10:45, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

This is in good shape; it covers the subject reasonably well and is supported by citations. Well written and illustrated with images (appropriate tags). Just a few comments. I will check back in a few days. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 10:28, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
 * "...around 1200 by the de Braose family and...": Both in the lead and the main body, the link is "Braose family". Shouldn't the pipelink include the "de"?
 * "...with other parts suffering from attack from...": repeated use of "from".


 * Cheers! Changes have been made as proposed. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:17, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing as GA now. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 05:56, 2 July 2016 (UTC)