Talk:Haytham Kenway/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:47, 19 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all on a quick read, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:22, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Can we fill in the "n.a." fields in the fair use image, "not applicable" isn't a suitable rationale for NFCC.
 * " great and really effective idea" is this a quote? It's not really encyclopedic in tone
 * "led to some backlash" from?
 * "include a reference to Haytham for the game" in rather than for?
 * "that certain fans"' or just "some"?
 * "Born in .. born into..." repetitive.
 * "unbeknownst" would "unknown" do the job?
 * "families demise" do you really mean "family's demise"?
 * "Templar Shay Patrick Cormac to keep" overlinked.
 * Don't link common words like earthquake.
 * "As the assassins refused" lower case or capital assassin?
 * "After crushing the" tone
 * "his father Edward, he" overlinked.
 * "son, Connor. In a contemporary review of Assassin's Creed III for " both overlinked.
 * "his father Edward, with" overlinked.
 * Odd turn of phrase "actually right" so I'd put it in quotes.
 * You appear to be not repeating links in refs, so unlink ref 19.
 * would expect refs 25, 29 and 35 to have their work in italics.
 * All done, thanks for the input!--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 12:41, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
 * , I think it is important to implement Cite video game in this article, like how I did in this diff. --► Sincerely:  Sola virum  01:04, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
 * That's not a requirement of GAN. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 06:28, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
 * those fair use "n.a." should be replaced, "not applicable" doesn't apply to individual parts of NFCC. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 21:10, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
 * done.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 07:58, 30 May 2021 (UTC)

All good, passing to GA. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 08:41, 31 May 2021 (UTC)