Talk:He Could Be the One/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tb hotch Ta lk C.  18:24, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Lead
 * is a pop song -> The infobox only says "Country pop"
 * Since Cyrus or Hannah Montana, if you will, is a pop singer, the song is pop. It would be redundant listing "Pop, country-pop" on the infobox since one of them is very broad and includes the other. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * as promotion for an episode of the same title the series' third soundtrack, -> missing word
 * reaching the top twenty in Norway and the United States. "He Could Be the One" peaked at number ten on the Billboard Hot 100, -> Should be reworded.
 * Why? Sounds fine to me. There isn't any repetition. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Forget this. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Forget this. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Background
 * "He Could Be the One" co-written by -> "He Could Be the One" was co-written by
 * According to Allmusic, its genre has some teen pop influences -> source states that the soundtrack has teen pop influences, not the song
 * The soundtrack includes the song. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  18:46, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * He described Cyrus' vocals to be with a slight twang and husky.[6] -> Who?
 * Truitt. I changed "He" to "Truitt" and, in the last sentence, "Truitt" to "him". Is that O.K.? -- ipodnano05 * <sup style="font-family:tahoma; color:SteelBlue;">leave@message 18:34, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok. Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C.  18:46, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok. Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C.  18:46, 11 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Chart performance
 * of the Billboard Hot 100 and any country -> of the Billboard Hot 100 or
 * and any country -> source does not say that
 * and any country -> source does not say that


 * Music video
 * heart breaker -> heartbreaker
 * The song debuted and peaked at number ninety-nine on the Canadian Hot 100, -> source says 97
 * He Could Be the One" peaked at number sixty-eight on the Australian Singles Chart, -> According to the source or this it didn't enter to the chart.
 * I forgot that Australian-charts.com only supplies the top fifty positions. The charting position should be archived in Pandora. -- <b style="font-family:tahoma; color:LightBlue;">ipodnano05</b> * <sup style="font-family:tahoma; color:SteelBlue;">leave@message 18:45, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * What is "Pandora"?. Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C.  19:30, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * It's an archive for charts in Australia. I'll make sure to look for the week corresponding to the song. -- <b style="font-family:tahoma; color:LightBlue;">ipodnano05</b> * <sup style="font-family:tahoma; color:SteelBlue;">leave@message 01:35, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, only one thing and this'll pass (music video section). Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C.  02:46, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * It's an archive for charts in Australia. I'll make sure to look for the week corresponding to the song. -- <b style="font-family:tahoma; color:LightBlue;">ipodnano05</b> * <sup style="font-family:tahoma; color:SteelBlue;">leave@message 01:35, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, only one thing and this'll pass (music video section). Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C.  02:46, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, only one thing and this'll pass (music video section). Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C.  02:46, 13 June 2010 (UTC)

There are some comments, article on hold until June 18, 2010. Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C. 18:24, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

All done within seven days, meets GA criteria, so I have to say pass. Tb hotch Ta lk <sup style="color:#2C1608;">C. 03:39, 13 June 2010 (UTC)