Talk:Head Up High (Oh Land song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:14, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * in March of the following year. → "the" before "March"
 * Done

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)
 * The effect of the cover make Oh Land look as if she had a moustache, just saying
 * I have to agree with you there haha. Carbrera (talk) 04:42, 10 September 2017 (UTC).

Background and writing

 * She released "Head Up High" → She went on releasing it
 * Done


 * Reflecting on all six of the remixes, she claimed that she asked only musicians that she "really admire[s]" then stated that she enjoyed listening to what they could make of her music → I think there's some sort of mistake in this sentence, because it doesn't make sense towards the end
 * Done

Composition and lyrics

 * Kory Grow described the track's genre → use "its" here for alternation
 * Done

Critical reception

 * Flawless ;)

Music video

 * She enters a → She then enters a
 * Done


 * Because of the live performance, rename the section "Music video and promotion"
 * Done

Track listings and formats

 * Flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

 * Credits and personnel adapted from Earth Sick liner notes → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Earth Sick

Copy-violation

 * 13.8% is super!

Outcome

 * WOW, this was really an AMAZING article from the Oh Land series. It was nearly flawless and this is really the maximum of comments I could bring up. I put the article for 7 days for you to fix some minor issue before I can pass this beautiful page. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:16, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
 * – Thank you so much for the compliments and the review. I appreciate it. I'll try to get on your request really soon. Thanks again. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 04:42, 10 September 2017 (UTC).
 * Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:29, 10 September 2017 (UTC)