Talk:Headline News ("Weird Al" Yankovic song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 11JORN (talk · contribs) 23:50, 1 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * How about linking Al Yankovic in the Writer parameter and unlinking him in the Producer one?


 * Lead
 * "Headline News" charted at number 4 --> "Headline News" charted at number four


 * Release
 * The single charted and peaked at number 4 --> I think it is better: "The song charted and peaked at number four"
 * which corresponds to a position of 104 on the Billboard Hot 100. --> Italicize Billboard
 * "Headline News" received mostly positive reviews from critics --> Rewrite to ""Headline News" received mostly positive reviews from music critics"
 * Remove "although at least one critic noted that the source material would soon become dated", this review is cited later
 * Not all reviews, however, were so glowing --> "Not all reviews, however, were positive"
 * Yankovic first started performing "Headline News" in August of 1994 --> Yankovic first started performing "Headline News" in August 1994
 * Italicize Larry King Live

On hold.
 * Status
 * Thank you for the review! How does it look now?-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   23:08, 2 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Passed  Jorn  talk 12:50, 3 August 2013 (UTC)