Talk:Headreach Island/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:52, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's me done for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:40, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Two-sentence lead is a little light here, perhaps two more sentences.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "W[1]; it is part" ref after semi-colon.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "United States Geological Survey measured" put (USGS) after this.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "USGS aerial imagery..." fragment, no full stop.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "islands in the Delta" full name for Delta (first appearance in the main body) and link (and remove it from the See also).
 * ✅ Done.
 * "Fern Island (California)" is in the see also but is already "linked", and red "see also" links aren't helpful in any case.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "construction of the Stockton Deepwater Shipping Channel involved constructing" construction ... constructing...
 * ✅ Done.
 * Link levee.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "and Roberts Island were 50" overlinked.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "the Fern-Headreach-Tule complex" both over-linked.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "The Modesto Bee" -> The is part of the name of the paper.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "$5 to $6 million" inflate.
 * ✅ Done.
 * "nearby Tule Island had " overlinked. And remove from See also.
 * ✅ Done.
 * There we go. jp×g 10:24, 7 September 2021 (UTC)