Talk:Health in Yemen/Archive 1

Sarah's peer review
Hey! I really liked your draft of your article so far. You have chosen a topic which is very important and especially in relation to Yemen necessary to address. You stated a lot of facts which is great. So reading through your article I really had the feeling of getting a lot of fact based information. Even though I think sometimes the numbers are a little bit difficult to follow, so maybe you could work on that. I liked that you already found some subtopics and maybe you can find another one to make your article even more informative.

I would change the order of Maternal and Child Health Care and HIV/AIDS, because I think HIV/AIDS is a more specialised topic so it should be listed after Maternal and Child Health Care.

To review your article contains so far of a: a lead section that is easy to understand, a clear structure, balanced coverage, neutral content, reliable sources! Good job, keep going! :)

Sarahojukwu (talk) 23:35, 18 October 2018 (UTC)Sarahojukwu

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2018 and 22 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Fioreclaudia.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:12, 16 January 2022 (UTC)