Talk:Health in the United Arab Emirates/Archive 1

This whole "article" reads like a fluff piece. I find it inappropriate for an encyclopedic-entry. It sounds like it was copied straight out of a promotional pamphlet or brochure.

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The entire section mentions studies and surveys, none of which are actually cited. Furthermore, there are multiple grammatical mistakes and subjective ideas. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.200.214.106 (talk) 06:45, 7 June 2017 (UTC)

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