Talk:Heart Attack (Noizy song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

I am reunited with you for this review! --K. Peake 07:52, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Only keep dance and hip hop in the infobox, per the others only being sourced as elements
 * "Musically, it is an" → "It is an"
 * "Its lyrics explore a" → "The lyrics explore a"
 * "and peaked at" → "while peaking at"

Background and composition

 * "Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "Heart Attack" is an"
 * Where is the dance genre sourced?
 * Removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)


 * "to have his significant other" → the source mentions "all to himself", so reword to add something similar

Reception

 * "received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
 * songtexte.de should not be italicised
 * hiphop.de should not be italicised
 * "deemed it an" → "deemed the song an"
 * laut.de should not be italicised
 * The laut.de ref appears to source animates instead of motivates and the calm down part says "Only Loredana manages to slow him down", per my translator
 * "including number three in" → "reaching number three in"
 * [13][14][15] should be ordered to correspond with the countries listed

Music video

 * Img looks good!
 * "before a petrol station" are you sure this is appropriate terminology?
 * Do you have a suggestion? Iaof2017 (talk) 11:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)


 * "in the city of Durrës, Albania, and along" → "in Durrës and along"

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this went reasonably quick! --K. Peake 09:09, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello hope you're having a good summer. I've responded to all of the issues with few comments from my side. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 11:08, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now and for the gas station part, I used next to instead. --K. Peake 06:31, 26 July 2022 (UTC)