Talk:Heavy Competition/GA1

GA Review
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Another great article, Hunter. Here are some minor suggestions: I will put the article on hold for seven days. Good luck! :)  The Le ft orium  20:41, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
 * "Heavy Competition" is the twenty-second episode – should be "22nd" since the other numbers in the article aren't spelled out.
 * spell out "doesn't" in the plot (twice)
 * Since there's currently only one image in the article, can you add an image of Idris Elba to the production section?
 * Wilson said the scripted moment in which he spun around the HarperCollins secretary and said "spin move" was very popular among the writers – Is something missing from this sentence? It doesn't make any sense to me.
 * "The A.V. Club" should be italicized
 * I think I got them all. I tried rewording the "spin move" sentence to make more sense, let me know if that's better. Thanks! —  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  22:00, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nice work. I'll pass the article.  The Le ft orium  17:20, 16 May 2009 (UTC)