Talk:Heavy Crown (song)/GA2

GA Review
Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:57, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:57, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Shouldn't a release date be included in here? Including the date of the reissued album would be fine by me


 * I don't know how it's exactly credited in the liner notes, but would you credit The Invisible Men as writers, or the three men that make up the trio?
 * I'm inclined to credit them as the trio, like how it's presented in the liner notes of the album. The same way that I've credited 'Iggy Azalea', not 'Amythest Kelly'.

Lead

 * I didn't find any mistakes, but could the lead be broken into two smaller paragraphs? It's matter of personal preference I guess

Background

 * The first sentence's use of 'which' sounds a bit redundant; could this possibly be reworded?


 * You could remove 'also' in the sentence that begins with: "On 14 November..."

Composition
Looks very good to me; nothing to change here :)

Paragraph 2

 * Would you link Idolator here? Probably not, since it was linked in the composition section...
 * Yeah, I'm a one link-per article kinda editor.

GA
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Put on hold

End of GA Review:
I definitely think this article should pass GA; I don't see anything wrong with it. You've outdone yourself on this article, but I would like you to see what I had to say before passing it. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 23:26, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thankyou for your comments and kind words, I've addressed your concerns above.  Azealia 911  talk  07:50, 5 March 2016 (UTC)