Talk:Hebe Camargo

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The User requires spelling proofreading of an expert in English. Rationale: Phrase of article:Wikipedia:Translation. Section:How to translate - Once you have finished translating, you may ask a proofreader to check the translation. Is urgent!!! —Preceding Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by 187.22.206.160 (talk) 20:03, 17 January 2010 (UTC)

Please improve the quality of content:


 * Make proofreading of article
 * Improving the quality of content —Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.46.241.253 (talk) 14:17, 3 February 2010 (UTC)


 * No, sorry. I've tried to have a bit of a copyedit and clean up the English, but the translation is so garbled in places that I really can't figure out what it's on about. For instance:

She was in the group that was to port of city of Santos seek the television equipments for the formation of the first Brazilian network, Rede Tupi.

or

... the first Sunday program of Hebe Camargo, the Rede Record, the program devote as interviewer and she becomes the absolute leader of the hearing, accompanied by...

There seem to be some issues with the chronology as well - first it states that "In the 1950s, she entered television", then "In the 1960s, Camargo moved to the Rede Record, where..." But then it says "in 1950, after a long period away from television, [she] returned to work as interviewer", and yet "The television debut occurred in 1955".

I don't know the first thing about Brazilian television or popular culture, so someone who does is probably better placed to improve the article... Brickie (talk) 13:32, 31 March 2010 (UTC)

By doubts about the translation unreadable, so I would place right below this biography, written in Portuguese, and then you can make the retranslation of this biography, organizing the content in accordance with the policy of English Wikipedia. Thank you for your comments and reviews. (187.22.206.39 (talk) 14:37, 1 April 2010 (UTC))

As for his doubts about the article, I organized the events for each date (in order) to make it clearer understanding of it. 187.22.223.64 (talk) 14:36, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

The new reform made in the article on Hebe Camargo presents signs of British English, not of the English that this encyclopedia is adept, the American English. 187.22.204.143 (talk) 01:46, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

Not a featured article
Please do not add the tag to articles which have not been promoted via WP:FAC. This is not a featured article, and would not even make good article in its current state. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 17:28, 23 April 2010 (UTC)

Trivia Section
I think this article could be made much clearer and more informative if the facts under the "Trivia" header were written into the main body of the article. I don't believe that a list of random facts provides a very clear idea of Mrs. Camargo's life. As it stands, the "Trivia" section contains some facts already covered in the article (e.g. her singing career), and some facts that deserve to be written about in more detail (e.g. her family). --A2soup (talk) 16:00, 2 May 2010 (UTC)

Awards and honors Section
The User requires spelling proofreading in the section "Awards and honors". --Gu1997 (talk) 16:53, 7 May 2010 (UTC)

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