Talk:Heike Friedrich (wheelchair basketball)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

Let me return you a favor by reviewing your article. Thanks for all the copy edit. This may take some days. TheQ Editor    (Talk) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

Lead

 * Needs to include about how Friedrich became disabled.
 * No. There's a rule about not focusing on disabilities. So that information should not go in the lead. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Needs to include her place of birth.
 * It was also runner-up - it?
 * The team. "It" is the correct pronoun. Changed to "The team". Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Infobox

 * wikilink Holger Glinicki
 * Good old Holger. Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Perhaps update all her medals from the Achievements section in the "Medal Record" section. (It looks like she won more than two medals)
 * Added European championships. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Biography

 * Might want to divide it into sections.
 * Needs to include something about her coach.
 * Mentioned Holger Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
 * wikilink "Silver Laurel Leaf"
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
 * by a point should be by one point
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Achievements

 * Wikilink the events if possible.
 * They are linked earlier in the article. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Awards

 * Wikilink if possible.

Images

 * Explain in more detail about the infobox image.
 * What do you want to know? Laura took it at the Gliders and Rollers World Challenge in Sydney in July 2012. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Make the infobox image smaller maybe. (Although not necessary.) It's just taking away some space.
 * Using the default size. Don't was to fix it at a specified size because that may cause problems for people with mobile devices. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Other

 * ref 5 is a dead link.
 * Aaargh. To be expected I suppose. Removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
 * You may want to look at some reviews for ref 8. The info should be okay but there may be possible malware.
 * How strange. The link points to here. Check your machine. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

That's basically all what I can find.  TheQ Editor    (Talk) 00:22, 11 August 2014 (UTC)


 * All points addressed. Thanks for your review! Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:59, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Nice, I've helped you specified the image caption, now it's a GA.