Talk:Helix of sustainability

Hullo Roger, Before I start editing, please could you let me know what you think this page is advertising. Regards Nasier Alcofribas (talk) 21:24, 30 July 2008 (UTC) Phlegm Rooster (talk) 06:07, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Suggestions
I just closed the AfD as no consensus, but I've got some suggestions to make (note that these have nothing to do with the close). Likely everything after the second paragraph can go; it's full of spam-ish word choice and needs a complete rewrite. The images don't look very good the way they are right now, directly across from each other. Try moving them so one is below the other. That's all I've got for now, but if someone reminds me I can swing by and make some more later. Cheers, everyone. lifebaka++ 13:13, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * First, lifebaka - thanks for the judgement of Solomon! Nasier Alcofribas (talk) 23:06, 13 August 2008 (UTC)


 * OK I've had a go at the images, but I need to have a think about a more appropriate prose style for the rest of the suggestions Nasier Alcofribas (talk) 23:06, 13 August 2008 (UTC)