Talk:Hell House LLC Origins: The Carmichael Manor

Plot written by someone with poor English skills, needs improvement
The sentences don't read correctly or properly contextualise the film.

Appreciate the work of whoever did this but someone should fix it up 27.96.216.205 (talk) 13:09, 7 April 2024 (UTC)

Who wrote this review?
Poor writing skills and an unfinished review 216.189.137.228 (talk) 21:21, 8 April 2024 (UTC)