Talk:Hello (Pop Smoke song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 00:26, 3 March 2021 (UTC)

Per your request. Will try to finish this by tomorrow. LOVI 33  00:26, 3 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
It is perfectly fine how it is. ❌, we need to mention that the two rappers were credited under their real names. Rico Beats and CashMoneyAP producer the track.
 * American rapper Pop Smoke, featuring fellow American →
 * from the former's posthumous debut deluxe studio album, Shoot for the Stars, Aim for the Moon (2020) →
 * It was written by Pop Smoke and A Boogie wit da Hoodie, who are credited under their legal names of Bashar Jackson and Julius Dubose, alongside Steven Victor, Jason Avalos, Alex Petit and Ricardo Lamarre. The latter two handled the song's production. →
 * I'm not saying we shouldn't mention that, I'm just saying it is not notable for the lead. It is however 100% notable to be placed in the body of the article, that is why I didn't ask for it to be re-worded below. LOVI  33  17:09, 12 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The song was released →
 * "Hello" features instrumentation of piano, strings, and drum. →
 * Pop Smoke references basketball player Manu Ginóbili while A Boogie wit da Hoodie declares himself the king of New York and says Pop Smoke would be too if he were alive. →
 * while reaching the top 40 in Greece and Canada. →

Background and release

 * Are you sure his manager announced the song? To me it seems more like he is teasing it as it says credits but never explicitly the title "Hello".
 * Changed


 * The tweet also doesn't back up that he announced it would be on the deluxe edition of the album.
 * Removed
 * released on the deluxe version as →
 * The song was released as the →
 * Target Alex Petit to CashMoneyAP
 * Target Ricardo Lamarre to Rico Beats

Composition and reception

 * HotNewHipHop, "Hello" consists of an "oppressive →
 * in the songs lyrics. Pop Smoke raps: →
 * king of New York while →

Commercial performance
❌ There are not that many chart positions so I am going to leave it like this.
 * The song initially charted →
 * Then, the track later peaked at number 97 on the US Billboard Hot 100 chart →
 * I don't like the listing of different chart positions. Try writing them out in full like what you did for the United States or say "It peaked within the top 40 of ...., the top 50 of...., etc"

Credits and personnel

 * Looks good!

Charts

 * Austrian chart ref isn't working. You need to add "feat. A Boogie Wit Da Hoodie" to the artist parameter
 * German chart ref also isn't working. You have the wrong song id


 * The song doesn't appear in the Irish ref. You might have to use the Ireland3 parameter instead of Ireland4


 * New Zealand Heatseekers → New Zealand Hot Singles


 * You can remove the Twitter Hot 100 reference as it now appears in the template source

Final comments and verdict

 * Overall I think this is a great article and could definitely be GA, but I have one concern. I think that this article was nominated a little too soon. Considering that it just entered the Billboard Hot 100 this week, I would say it hasn't reached a peak yet. I usually would recommend waiting until it has reached its peak in most major markets to nominate as if you don't it usually leads to stability concerns. Plus the song was released just a month ago meaning more information could surface about the song. Due to this, I'm going to have a to see what other editors think.  LOVI  33  17:59, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree that it's a little early to nominate this. ~ HAL  333  02:13, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

I just realized that you probably weren't notified that I finished my review since I opened it for a second opinion so I am pinging you now. It would be great if you could respond to my comments. I'll make my decision whether to fail or pass this article in the next few days. LOVI 33  03:48, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I would like to comment that in my opinion, this article's recentness does not lead to potential issues with stability because it was a Pop Smoke posthumous release so he obviously can't promote it, plus the Hot 100 position was an entry after the song previously appeared on the Bubbling Under chart rather than its actual debut on Billboard charts. So in my opinion, it should be passed. --K. Peake 11:01, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , is right. If you do not know; Pop Smoke was shot and killed during a home invasion last year in California. I lived in California for a year when I was six and my family and I moved because we thought it was too dangerous (And man were we right). The song is also only rising on the Hot 100. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 04:14, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I appreciate your opinions but I cannot take them into consideration as you have bias since you are the nominator. I will however take Kyle Peake's into consideration. However, I definitely cannot pass this article at the moment. I have signaled some of my comments in which you haven't done and I have responded to your reasoning about having the the real names producers in the lead. The comments about the prose and the cite tweet template I can be a little more lenient on, but you definitely have to fix the charts as at the moment, they are not currently backed up by a source. LOVI  33  17:09, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Just looking over the article now, I've noticed that the Portuguese and Swiss refs also aren't working. Please fix this as well. LOVI  33  17:14, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok. I have fixed the charts and removed their real names as you have insisted. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:41, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * thank you for that. Although I was just doing a quick check over the article and the I think the NZ Hot Singles source you have is wrong. You claim it peaked at number 6 on the chart but the source says number 37. Also the prose says it peaked at number 8. It would be great if you could also fix this. You also haven't given me a reason why you didn't re-word the first sentence. LOVI  33  14:03, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I have removed the NZ Hot Singles as it is not an important chart. I have also explained the first sentence above. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 23:06, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Very well. ✅ LOVI  33  00:07, 14 March 2021 (UTC)