Talk:Hello Kitty (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: My love is love (talk · contribs) 14:48, 20 September 2014 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "It was written by Lavigne, Chad Kroeger, David Hodges and Martin Johnson, while the song was produced by Kroeger and Hodges, with additional production by Brandon Paddock and Kyle Moorman." - Try to reword this sentence. It is very lengthy.
 * Link music video, Billboard, Japanese culture, racist.


 * Background and composition
 * Try to reword the sentence from the lead which is repeated here.
 * Use "" instead of '' in the sentence 'Kawai' is Japanese for 'cute'.
 * Link Japanese, Manga, Japanese video games, sexual euphemisms.


 * Critical reception
 * Change Allmusic and MusicOMH to AllMusic and musicOMH.
 * Mention the writer of The Michigan Daily.
 * The last sentence in this section is unsourced. If you can't find a reliable source remove it.


 * Commercial performance
 * "The song also surges to 5,000" - surged


 * Music video
 * Instead of mentioning the day ("that Wednesday") use the date.
 * Slant Magazine is not italicized.
 * There is no source for The Independent review.
 * The last paragraph of the Reception section has problems with close paraphrasing. Please try to reword it. I Am...   ***D.D.  14:48, 20 September 2014 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * Try to expand this section with reviews, descriptions of the performances (if there are any reliable sources mentioning that).


 * All ✅ except the live performances request, which I did not find reliable links for inclusion. Thank you for the review. Alex talk page! 10:41, 23 September 2014 (UTC)
 * Great job. Passing. I Am...   ***D.D.  14:15, 23 September 2014 (UTC)