Talk:Helms Amendment to the Foreign Assistance Act/Archive 1

Create Sections
To help improve the article we could add sections for why people agree/ disagree this should be an amendment. --Bia2160372 (talk) 21:25, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
 * We could have a section for the history, current status on the amendment, the outcome it is causing, pro-life/pro-choice sides. The section that randomly talks about the political viewpoint on this is distracting and should have its own section if it is that important. Bia2160372 (talk) 04:40, 5 September 2017 (UTC)

Reliable Sources?
Some of the sources are not very reliable. Bia2160372 (talk) 04:40, 5 September 2017 (UTC)

Currently Editing
Currently Editing Article RebeccaNicolee (talk) 03:45, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

added agencies not mentioned that helped support and how congress addressed amendment in 1990 to provide clairty — Preceding unsigned comment added by RebeccaNicolee (talk • contribs) 05:47, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article?
I selected a few citations to review, ranging from different dates of the time the article has been created and I am not showing any not to be working. I also did not see any plagiarism or close paraphrasing in the article. RebeccaNicolee (talk) 04:29, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
Nothing appears to be out of date. I do feel the article needs more background on the helms amendment and mores statistics/facts around the amendment RebeccaNicolee (talk) 04:30, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

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Support
Included a new section which mentions polling that shows American support for the banning of funding for abortion overseas (which is what the Helms Amendment does). One user object to this inclusion. What do people think?

Furthermore, I do not see why there is a long mention on the history of the Mexico City Policy, which is a separate thing (only a brief mention is needed. Also, I do not see why one needs to mention Helms as a "strident anti-abortionist" it is already self-evident from his action make said amendment. What are people's thoughts on the matter? 3Kingdoms (talk) 03:22, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Do you object to the adjective "strident" or the noun "anti-abortionist" ? Wes sideman (talk) 15:50, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I think it is redundant to include both. Helm's opposition to abortion seems fairly self-evident from the amendment itself.3Kingdoms (talk) 02:14, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
 * From many reliable sources, Helm's opposition to abortion was on the extreme right of the political spectrum. We could include examples of how he supported total bans on abortions, including in cases of rape, incest, and when the mother's life was in danger, and I'd be happy to expand the paragraph to include that, or we could go with an adjective. Wes sideman (talk) 15:10, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I feel like that should go on his page. 3Kingdoms (talk) 17:04, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
 * So add it to his article. Of course, this is already there: "Helms quickly became a "star" of the conservative movement,[36] and was particularly vociferous on the issue of abortion. In 1974, in the wake of the US Supreme Court's decision in Roe v. Wade, Helms introduced a constitutional amendment that would have prohibited abortion in all circumstances,[37] by conferring due process rights upon every fetus." Wes sideman (talk) 12:04, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I am little confused. My point is that Helm's opposition is already self-evident, so I do not see the point in bringing it up again in the article. Also, this is a rather minor point. I mostly wanted to discuss the polling cited, showing support for the amendment.3Kingdoms (talk) 00:00, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
 * You brought up the "strident anti-abortionist" phrase as a problem yourself, so I don't know why you're confused. Wes sideman (talk) 14:12, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I am confused because your posts have focused on showing that Helms was strongly against abortion, something I never disputed. Helms's opposition is well documented on his page and is fairly self-evident on this page given what the amendment does. Calling him a "strident anti-abortionist" seems redundant and abortionists is a somewhat loaded term. I hope that clears it up.3Kingdoms (talk) 01:39, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I can tell you that the phrase "strident anti-abortionist" is accurate and not loaded, and if you have an alternative description of the late senator that you'd like to suggest, I'm all ears. Wes sideman (talk) 11:43, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Wikitionary defines abortionist, pro-abortionist, and anti-abortionist as a derogatory term.3Kingdoms (talk) 00:10, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Why would you lie about something that is so easily checked? Abortionist and pro-abortionist include the note (derogatory). Anti-abortionist does not. Wes sideman (talk) 13:58, 31 January 2023 (UTC)

My apologies. I read derogatory as referring to the word before not after it. Abortionist is the only one labeled as chiefly derogatory and sometimes offensive. Given that, I think in general any derived term of abortionist should be removed. If I may ask why do you feel that it is needed to keep that phrase in? For me once again it seems unneeded with Helm’s opposition already well documented and self evident. Finally please do not jump to the conclusion that I was lying. I made a mistake. Thank you. 3Kingdoms (talk) 16:17, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm not opposed, in principle, to calling Helms a strident anti-abortionist. That said, the currently cited source is too weak to justify that analysis. It mentions that Helms was "anti-abortion" in a list of his beliefs, as part of a quote by "long-time political observer Earl Black" (maybe Earl Black (political scientist)). Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 15:16, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I'll work on the sourcing. I'm not the one who originally introduced the phrase, but I also have no problem with it, and I'm sure it will not be difficult to source it. Wes sideman (talk) 15:38, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
 * If Black does not call him an "anti-abortionist" then I really do not see a reason to include it. Saying he was strongly anti-abortion would be better although I still think it is unneeded as Helms's opposition is pretty self-evident.3Kingdoms (talk) 02:22, 10 February 2023 (UTC)

Polling
Dividing the discussion to talk about polling for it. I think the Marist poll warrants being included. While it does not say Helms Amendment it asks Americans is they oppose funding for abortion overseas which is exactly what the Amendment prohibits. Also, other sources connect it to the Amendment. 3Kingdoms (talk) 02:22, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * This is pure WP:COATRACK and should be called out as such. No. Wes sideman (talk) 12:38, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Most major policy pages have polling information. If anything were “coatrack” it is the extended coverage of the Mexico City Policy which is a different item. --3Kingdoms (talk) 14:15, 10 February 2023 (UTC)

"Strident"?
One problem with describing Helms as a "strident antiabortionist" as is done in the Background and passage section of the article is that none of the cited sources do so. The UPI source, instead, describes him as the Senate's "leading antiabortionist". "leading" and "strident" are very different adjectives, as I think we'll all agree. The heading on one of the source articles (an obituary) does describe him as "divisive" but "strident" and "divisive" are not synonyms, and this description is probably the product of a relatively low level headline writer anyway. Pretty good synonyms for "strident" are pejoratives such as "shrill", "grating", and "excessive". So it would be good Wikipedia form to normally use them about an individual only when quoting a source and not, of course, in Wikipedia's voice. Goodtablemanners (talk) 04:14, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * One of the problems with requiring every single adjective to be referenced to an exact duplicate in a source is that we don't do that. "Strident" is fine. Other synonyms for the word include "vocal", "outspoken", and "vociferous", which he was, on this subject. Listing the worst synonyms out of a list of 60 words isn't an argument. It's frankly quite ridiculous that you're so set on changing one adjective. Helms was a strident antiabortionist. You know this. So why are you trying to soften his image in this one article? The man wanted all abortions outlawed, in every case, with no exceptions, even going so far as to extend his influence to other countries with the very amendment that this article is about. If you're really married to removing that adjective, start an RfC, because you haven't offered one valid reason here for doing so. Wes sideman (talk) 12:42, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * There have been plenty of valid objections, such as his view being self-evident so why include? A point you have not addressed since this began. When you save “soften” his image you seem to be implying a nefarious motive for wanting it removed. No one here has accused you of wanting to keep it because you believe it will “blacken” his image. We are entitled to that same level of respect. Given that none of the sources use the phrase “strident anti-abortionist” I see no reason to include it. Regardless of one’s views on the man and his policies we are to be objective and some of us question how fair using said phrase is.3Kingdoms (talk) 04:57, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
 * No one is asking for "an exact duplicate" adjective. This is a straw man argument. We go by sources here, not gut feelings. The first and best source on your list, the only one which pairs "antiabortionist" with an adjective, uses the adjective "leading" (i.e. "principal", "foremost", "preeminent") which is nowhere near "strident". "Strident", since you apparently don't realize it, refers to the style of one's argumentation, not the substance of the positions taken.Goodtablemanners (talk) 14:47, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I would check the sources at the end of that sentence if I were you, as you apparently missed a few adjectives. Wes sideman (talk) 15:21, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Let's see. I noticed "imaginative", "outspoken" (but that's substantially less negative than "strident"). One source did say that Helms was "vociferous", which also isn't as negative as "strident", but that source is a miserable one anyway because it self describes as a "Magazine of Feminist, Progressive Thinking", which, of course, isn't going to say neutral things about Helms. In fact, I'd have figured that it would have said he was strident, but instead it showed a little restraint. Goodtablemanners (talk) 17:51, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * You're skipping a lot of text that exists in every one of those sources, and this exercise in pedantry is not going to get you to your goal of removing an adjective for no good reason. I suggest you start an RfC so that other editors can point out how insane this quest is. Have a good day. Wes sideman (talk) 19:12, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Of the four people who have discussed this topic you are the only one firmly for keeping it. If you feel strongly that you are right and think an RFC will support your argument, go for it. Personally, I think discussing here with other people joining would be better for now. 3Kingdoms (talk) 01:20, 11 February 2023 (UTC)

Wes you restored “strident anti-abortionist” saying that the talk page supports its inclusion. Right now the opposite is the case, with you being the only one strongly in favor. I would like to hear from more people, but the talk page as of now does not support its inclusion.
 * Other synonyms for the word include "vocal", "outspoken", and "vociferous" - those three words are in three separate sources describing Helms' anti-abortionist stance. There are more but I don't see the need to WP:REFBOMB a single sentence; it's already too many, put there by me just to show that your arguments against the word are spurious. You have stated no valid reason for removing it. Again, if you think your arguments are valid, why haven't you started an RfC? Wes sideman (talk) 14:20, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
 * That does not change the fact that as of right now 3 people are not convinced it should be included. Why not use one of the three words you pointed out to describe Helms plus anti-abortion. Since none of the sources use anti-abortionist why include? I have not started an rfc because I do think it is warranted yet. If you feel strongly that one is needed go for it.
 * I don't need to create one, because the article is fine as it is. Also, you just said "none of the sources use anti-abortionist", which is yet another lie, or inaccuracy, or oversight, or whatever polite word you prefer (let me know). That exact phrase in this source is already cited.Wes sideman (talk) 14:27, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I don’t see it anywhere in the article. Again more people right now are against the wording than for. You are the only one in favor. If you believe so strongly in a RFC you are free to ask. Accusing me of lying is not a good way of getting me to accept your argument.
 * Just checked, google does show the line in the article, but it is not there when I click on the article. Maybe it was taken out? It only says “ Named after Senator Jesse Helms, the amendment prevents the use of aid for abortion as a family planning method, or to coerce women into having terminations.”
 * It's also in the UPI source, which is already in the reflist as well. Either start an RfC or WP:DROPTHESTICK. I do not care which. Wes sideman (talk) 15:53, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for linking the article, although it does seem a little dated to use the term (1987) it does use it. If you wish to ask the others who discussed this if they think this is enough to include I am all for. However, my core point was still not that Helms was called this once (he was a polarizing man to say the least), but that it is warranted in being included which I still do not think is the case. As it stands it still 3 to 1 for people who are disinclined to keep it. Finally since you have repeatedly brought up RFC I don’t understand why you insist I make one when I already explained why I don’t think it is needed. If you think it is needed and it will decide in you favor go for it, but I do intend right now to make one. Thank you
 * Request for comment created since both sides remain convinced of their argument.3Kingdoms (talk) 03:55, 16 February 2023 (UTC)