Talk:Help Is on the Way/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 08:11, 2 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I'm  Azealia 911  talk, I'll post a full review within a couple of days   Azealia 911   talk  08:11, 2 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Hi Azealia, thanks for taking up this review quickly. Recently there's been a lot going on in my life, and I'm pretty busy now. So feel free to take your time with the comments, as I probably won't be able to respond for a few days. Famous Hobo (talk) 00:19, 3 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Sure thing, I've made a few comments and saved them to a word document, I'll wait until I've made full and comprehensive review before posting. Best,  Azealia 911  talk  07:06, 3 October 2015 (UTC)

Lead

 * "song to reach the Billboard Hot 100 (89)" → "song to chart on the Billboard Hot 100, where it peaked at 89,"
 * Billboard should be in italics.

Infobox

 * Cover art needs an alt
 * Citations generally do not appear in infoboxes, perhaps add a sentence about how the song is melodic hardcore in the Composition section, and move the citation there.

Composition

 * "According to the sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group" can be reduced to just "According to the sheet music for the song," you don't need to justify the citation in the article.

Reception

 * Using 'said' when writing about peoples web reviews always strikes me as odd, because nobody said anything, they typed it. Try 'commented' or 'thought'.

Music video

 * There's no citation for the rather long description of the video.
 * "This was the first Rise Against music video to not feature any members of the band" needs citation.
 * Sadly, I can't find any source talking about what's in the video, other than it's the story of a family surviving Hurricane Katrina, so I can't put in a citation. But you are right about the length of the description, will shorten it. In regards to the band member's appearance, the citation I used only says they don't appear in the video, so I'll change it.
 * Fixed the second issue, just have to work on shortening the music video section, and we'll be done. Famous Hobo (talk) 15:06, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * only the shortening of the video description to go, then I can pass this happily.  Azealia 911  talk  09:49, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅, my apologies for taking so long, I just had trouble shortening the section for some reason. While the citation I used for the music video doesn't mention the attic and rooftop scenes, I think it's okay. I mean, if you watch the video, it's pretty obvious it isn't original research. Famous Hobo (talk) 06:59, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Personal and credits

 * Personal should be spelled Personnel
 * Whoops...✅

Charts

 * Is there a way of giving a more specific reference style? All but one of the listings links to a long page of achieved chart positions, have you considered using ?
 * Make the columns sortable
 * OCC should be expanded to the full title of Official Charts Company.
 * All instances of chart providers can be linked, just as they would if template was used.
 * Per WP:USCHARTS if a song has entered the Rock Songs chart, the Alternative Songs and Mainstream Rock Songs charts cannot be listed, so remove them.
 * ✅ I changed all the charts to singlechart, except for the heatseekers, which isn't supported. I wasn't sure whether to include them or not, but they seem like a chart to leave in