Talk:Help Wanted (SpongeBob SquarePants)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sportsguy17 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article. I look forward to it and feel free to leave me a message about anything. Best,  Sports guy 17  (talk • contribs • sign) 02:44, 9 December 2013 (UTC)


 * Going over some basics: here is the Checklinks Report, and the Reflinks report. I will be posting a section-by-section analysis shortly.  Sports guy 17  (talk • contribs • sign) 00:24, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

As I begin the section-by-section, I am going to advise you that a snowstorm (known as Nor'easters) is hitting Boston tonight throughout tomorrow and if I lose power, I will be unable to respond for a while. For time purposes, I am only going to mention sections that need improvement, especially regarding sources. If free will beats fate, then I'll check for mechanics (spelling & grammar) later once reference improvements are made.
 * That's just OK. I hope you'll be OK too. :) Mediran ( t  •  c ) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Excellent job. I spent most of my morning shoveling snow off my driveway and walkway, albeit I still have power and so does everyone, so this is good . Anyway, good job. I verified the Plot summary references and no others need to be added. I will be checking all references and checking for spelling and grammar. This looks good so far.  Sports guy 17  (talk • contribs • sign) 21:16, 15 December 2013 (UTC)

Section-by-section Analysis
The lead is looking pretty good overall. The first few sentences of the third paragraph need to be copy edited: For example, change it to The episode was written by Hillenburg, Derek Drymon, and Tim Hill and the animation director was Alan Smart. Otherwise, it seems to follow MOS:LEAD quite well.
 * Lead
 * Done. Mediran ( t  •  c ) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

Although this section is about the plot, it could add sources in more details. If the given sources already support the details, use for the duplicates and the original should be (without the tags of course )
 * Plot summary
 * Well, there is currently a source from the DVD. Is that OK or should I have to add more source/s? But I don't think there are other sources more reliable than what is presently written there. Mediran ( t  •  c ) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

This section is well-sourced, but is very short. Either combine it or expand it, since while its not necessarily a requirement per WP:WIAGA, it can be somewhat awkward to read a short section.
 * Read-through
 * I have merged it to the "Release" section. Mediran ( t  •  c ) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

This is what I have for now. Lets start here. The article is looking well so far.  Sports guy 17  (talk • contribs • sign) 01:39, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I'm looking forward to what this is going to be. Thanks again. :) Mediran ( t  •  c ) 03:59, 14 December 2013 (UTC)

Final review
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality, no copyvios, spelling and grammar:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Pass!  Sports guy 17  (talk • contribs • sign) 00:27, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much Sportsguy17! :) Mediran ( t  •  c ) 04:11, 18 December 2013 (UTC)