Talk:Hemu Kalani

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The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Edofedinburgh 00:26, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

Just to say, this reads more like a eulogy than a Wikipedia article. 84.97.245.8 (talk) 14:02, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Wow, no kidding. Yikes. AtticusX (talk) 09:36, 10 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Hopefully not so much now. I have cut and rephrased quite drastically. My suspicion is that the original may have suffered in part from being written by someone for whom English is not their first language. It happens, no big deal. - Sitush (talk) 04:12, 11 February 2011 (UTC)

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