Talk:Henry Daglish/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

Picking up this one. Review to follow. Hawkeye7  (discuss)  21:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)


 * Lead:
 * "the sixth premier of Western Australia" Not sourced in the article.
 * " chief clerk in the WA Police Department." You haven't defined this abbreviation


 * Early life:
 * Link foundry
 * "an offer of £20" Consider using the inflation template
 * "the WA public service" You haven't defined this abbreviation


 * Premier of Western Australia
 * Typo: "Councill" should be "Council"
 * " the fourth youngest to this day" Suggest use of the As of template here
 * "Governor" Link Governor of Western Australia
 * "properties valued below £1,000" Consider using the inflation template


 * "Companies and Mining legislation" Should this be capitalised?
 * Source says "Companies and Mining legislation", so I decided to put the whole phrase in lowercase.

That should be all. Steelkamp (talk) 05:25, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it well written?
 * A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
 * B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * 1) Is it verifiable with no original research?
 * A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
 * B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons&mdash;science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
 * C. It contains no original research:
 * D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
 * B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks good. Passing.
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks good. Passing.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks good. Passing.
 * Looks good. Passing.