Talk:Henry Higgins Boiled Bagels/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 14:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks for reviewing! Happy to address any concerns you may have. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:30, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Stable?
Yes. Cos (X + Z) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)


 * --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Image check
Both images have good copyright and are appropriate in the article. Cos (X + Z) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)


 * --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Copyvio?
Earwig shows a 42.2% due to the quote being exactly worded like in the source but I think it should be fine. Cos (X + Z) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)


 * --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead
looks good. Cos (X + Z) 22:27, 7 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:24, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Layout

 * move portal bar to in between the navboxes and the categories
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:24, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Words to watch
looks good Cos (X + Z) 18:32, 9 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 19:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Source check
All sources are reliable Cos (X + Z) 17:57, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
 * all citations are styled good
 * Thanks --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 19:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Description

 * Among boiled bagel varieties are "everything", onion, and pumpernickel. remove quotation marks
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:41, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

History
*:@Another Believer [22] doesn’t mention Henry Higgins being a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2022; [23] mentions Henry Higgins being at the Hanukkah night market so, cut such as a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2002 and remove [22] Cos (X + Z) 14:30, 15 July 2024 (UTC) *:::@Another Believer I don’t see Henry Higgins in the source Cos (X + Z) 14:41, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * such as a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2002 remove as not mentioned change year to 2022
 * I am not sure what you mean here. This says, "This Jewish community center will host a Hanukkah food pop-up from 11 a.m. to 2 p.m. on Sunday, December 18. Vendors will include kosher brewery Leikam Brewing, Henry Higgins Bagels, Washington marinara business ManJa Creations, and new Jewish deli Jacob & Sons, among others." --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Can you let me know if anything else is needed here? Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 12:19, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Sorry if I haven’t responded Cos  (X + Z) 14:08, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * @CosXZ This source (#22) was published in 2022. I don't see a discrepancy with the article's current text. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:37, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * @CosXZ Under, "The Eastside Jewish Commons": "This Jewish community center will host a Hanukkah food pop-up from 11 a.m. to 2 p.m. on Sunday, December 18. Vendors will include kosher brewery Leikam Brewing, Henry Higgins Bagels, Washington marinara business ManJa Creations, and new Jewish deli Jacob & Sons, among others." --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:42, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Now I see thanks for pointing that out Cos (X + Z) 14:48, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * No problem! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:52, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * @Another Believer such as a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2002 change year to 2022 Cos (X + Z) 18:17, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Ah! Good catch! Thanks ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 18:20, 15 July 2024 (UTC)

Reception

 * looks good
 * Thanks --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Happy to address any remaining concerns you may have. Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 13:54, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

NPOV
Cos (X + Z) 14:25, 16 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:32, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Has major aspects and is focused?
Yes Cos (X + Z) 14:25, 16 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:32, 16 July 2024 (UTC)