Talk:Henry J. Hendrix

Edit request
This page was edited and chunks removed in December 2020, making it disjointed and incomplete. I understand that the preferred method for updates is to request edits via this page. I have declared a conflict of interest (paid by subject) on my page. I'm hoping an editor will help me understand how to submit substantial changes (large chunks of information was removed, and I have rewritten and edited the material to adhere to the encyclopedic nature of Wikipedia). The subject has paid a couple of other people over the years to do this, and I believe they have not understood the process. I don't want to make the same mistakes. Should I paste change requests here? Thank you, ShellyAnnV. ShellyAnnV (talk) 23:02, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

Reversion
There may be issues with neutrality of this page due to a connection of the editor (myself) to the subject. It was recently reverted to an earlier form that is no longer factually correct, and that also had a number of unsourced details. Rather than try to improve the old version, I would propose to discuss the new version, which at least is entirely based on independent sources, and try to improve it to deal with any issues. Any additional perspective is appreciated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Machetazic (talk • contribs) 15:00, 29 December 2019 (UTC)

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COI tag (May 2021)
An editor with a declared COI recently removed a COI tag from this page, and it reads somewhat advertisement-like to me as it currently stands. Aspening (talk) 01:42, 30 May 2021 (UTC)