Talk:Henry O'Farrell

Article needs cleanup.
The text of this article is extremely poor, with grotesquely ungrammatical sentences and outright incoherent passages.

"O'Farrell was an alcoholic listed as a law clerk having briefly been employed by his brother a Melbourne solicitor with Messrs O'Farrell & Son who regularly advertised in The Star newspaper of Ballarat from premises on Doveton Street, Ballarat."

Who had premises on Doveton Street? If the brother O'Farrell was a Melbourne solicitor, then who advertised in the Ballarat Star? And why is this even mentioned?

--Rich Rostrom 05:16, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Well, don't hesitate to clean it up then. Soczyczi 16:05, 16 August 2007 (UTC)