Talk:Henry Smith (Royal Navy officer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:44, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

Picking up this one. Hawkeye7  (discuss)  21:44, 25 June 2022 (UTC)


 * No need to link Jamaica, China
 * Removed.


 * Link Commodore
 * Done.


 * Link admiral on first use
 * Done.


 * Typo: "showing showing"
 * Removed.


 * "Smith was given command of another frigate, HMS Druid" Comma after Druid
 * Done.


 * "While some time was spent at Portsmouth and Gibraltar" Comma after Gibralar
 * Done.


 * No place of death or burial?
 * No place of burial that I can find, but he died in Florence.


 * ISBN for Hanes& Sanello (2002)?
 * Added.

Hi, thanks for taking a look! I've responded to your comments. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 22:55, 25 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Not my area of expertise, but a fascinating article, and a pleasure to read. Kudos for finding the 19th century sources. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  02:21, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Looks pretty good. Some minor issues.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: