Talk:Henry T. Sloane House/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 17:28, 31 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 03:15, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Will pick this up.--ZKang123 (talk)

Copyedits

 * Earwig flagged mainly common phrases and names of streets and places, and a quote that has been lifted from the source.

Lead

 * The facade is divided vertically into four bays and is made of limestone, rising four stories from the street. – The limestone facade is divided vertically into four bays and rises four stories from the street.
 * In 1901 it was purchased... – add comma after the year.
 * Starting in 1964, it... – tbh using that phrase, it kind of implied that currently, starting in 1964, that the Lycée Français de New York is now the present occupant, though it's not the case here. Might suggest using a different phrase.

More comments to come.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:58, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

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