Talk:Hepatic hydrothorax/GA2

GA Review
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Nominator: 18:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

I should finish the review today. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)


 * redundancy
 * Link severe ascites on fist occurrence
 * What does "cases" mean here?
 * Needs further explanation
 * Unsourced
 * comma after symptoms
 * Redundancy
 * I notice the articles is underlinked. Please fix that
 * Add a cvt template
 * I don't see anything on its causes
 * Change those to patients
 * Unsourced
 * Please change for those to for patients throughout the article
 * Sources are reliable
 * File:Hepatic hydrothorax after treatment.png lacks an author

That's all from me. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 11:31, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Sounds good! I will work on it promptly. 1. ✅ 2: ✅ 3: ✅ 4: ✅ 5: ✅ 6: ✅ 7: ✅ 8: ✅ 9: ✅ 10: ✅ 11: : I changed to people, as we need to write for the layperson per MEDMOS 12: ✅ 13: Doesn't this violate MEDMOS? 15: ✅ aeschylus (talk) 20:33, 12 June 2024 (UTC)

Driveby comment. Article on medical conditions should strive to use the most up-to-date appropriate sources, per WP:MEDDATE. There's a recent open access review at that perhaps could be used in this article. Esculenta (talk) 14:19, 13 June 2024 (UTC)


 * You might want to consider this. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 19:43, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I am, my activity is on-and-off. I will do so rn. aeschylus (talk) 21:53, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Let me know if you're done, because it seems like you aren't even addressing some of the issues I've raised. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 07:23, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Wolverine XI: AFAIK, I have addressed all of your concerns. However, I may have missed some. If I have, don't hesitate to let me know. aeschylus (talk) 19:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅. aeschylus (talk) 19:33, 20 June 2024 (UTC)