Talk:Heraclius the Elder/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mr rnddude (talk · contribs) 13:41, 1 August 2016 (UTC)

Hello there, I will be taking on the GA review for this article, expect a full review to be up by tomorrow. Mr rnddude (talk) 13:41, 1 August 2016 (UTC)

I will be using the above table to complete the review. Mr rnddude (talk) 13:41, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I have completed my initial review and my comments are available in the above table, I can see that quite a bit of effort has been put into improving the article, as such, I am willing to put this article on hold for the time being (I also note that you have been away for two weeks) to await your fixes. Feel free to ping me if you need anything. Mr rnddude (talk) 09:17, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

Comments

 * Non-reviewer comment: There is a Charles, Robert Henry; John, Bishop of Nikiu (2007) in Sources but no reference to it in Citations. If it isn't used, it should be moved under Further reading, or removed. If it is used, there should be incoming inline citation(s) to it (or it should be moved under General references per WP:GENREF). – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 23:32, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Concur with above comment, I'll make a note of it in my review under criterion 2a and b. Mr rnddude (talk) 04:38, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅; see inline citation #32. Theban Halberd (talk) 14:10, 31 August 2016 (UTC)