Talk:Herb Mitchell (actor)

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Hello there. I have just looked over this article and made changes to fill a request made at WP:GOCE/REQ.

Here are a couple of unresolved issues I encountered:

Bobnorwal (talk) 18:37, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * "He appeared in commercials for stock brokerage firms, for Dean Witter as the company spokesman and for Paine Webber as the executive." I tried to make sense of this line, but I'm still confused. Do you mean he played the role of an executive in the Paine Webber ad(s)? Did he have any business or relations with these companies beyond actor+client?
 * "He auditioned for the television series M*A*S*H without success." When was this? You mention it near the end of his career, but the show ended in 1983. Maybe you should move this line to a more appropriate spot.
 * Bobnorwal, for #1, he did play roles of executive and spokesman. I've put MASH into different location. George Ho (talk) 20:20, 20 November 2013 (UTC)