Talk:Herb Plews/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:18, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
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 * "as a result of the war just ending" - Go ahead and specify the war
 * Link stolen base at first appearance

2.
 * "Plews hit his first (and only) home run of the season against Bob Keegan as the Senators won 6–2" - I'm not explicitly seeing in the source that it was his only home run of the season, although I'm sure it's true. Is there a way you can add another source for certain verification?
 * " at "1953 Piedmont League Batting Leaders". Baseball-Reference. Retrieved May 8, 2020." - Is there a specific reason the word "at" is in there?

3.
 * "At his death, he was the only athlete from the Helena area to play Major League Baseball.[2][1]" - This implies that there has been another person from the Helena area to make it to the majors. If so, it's probably worth briefly mentioning the player's name.
 * There aren't any others that I know of, but the source is from when Plews died five years ago, so it's not current for the last few years. That's why I worded it that way. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 13:24, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

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The article's in very good shape, just a few loose ends to take care of. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 21:20, 17 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 15:01, 18 May 2020 (UTC)