Talk:Heuglin's gazelle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:14, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Comments
 * You could create Eritrean gazelle as a viable redirect to here.
 * Done


 * " nearly 67 cm" sounds oddly precise. All examples are "nearly 67cm" tall?  Is that 66cm?
 * Only one source gives the shoulder height and the number is indeed 67, presumably an average but it doesn't mention the sample size.


 * "measure 15 to 35 cm (5.9 to 13.8 in)." in length.
 * Done


 * Second lead para is a bit lumpy, several very short sentences, not flowing nicely.
 * I have combined and rephrased a few lines, let me know how it looks.


 * "an altitude of 1,400 m" do you  really mean elevation?
 * Yes, fixed


 * "with less than 2,500" fewer
 * Done


 * "They are spaced 119–173 cm (47–68 in) apart at the base" the horns are spaced more than  a metre apart at their base???
 * My bad, put cm instead of mm. Fixed


 * "(16–37 in) .[6][4] " no space after parenthesis and ref order in numerical order.
 * Fixed


 * " close to the fence" what fence?
 * Of the enclosure, added.


 * "(nearly six months)" not necessary.
 * Removed


 * " calf is born. Calves are born" repetitive.
 * Fixed


 * Explain/link IUCN.
 * Linked


 * '(Heuglin, 1868)' in the infobox but 1863 in prose.
 * Corrected to 1863

That's all I have, so I'm putting it on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:55, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * All comments addressed. Cheers, Sainsf  (t · c)  16:17, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Cool beans, I'm happy with the amendments and promoting to GA. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:01, 22 May 2020 (UTC)