Talk:Hexthorpe rail accident

Issues
The current issues i see are


 * No clear intro
 * Sources are needed to be cited, even if harvard
 * what happened when the trains hit each other? Were there any injuries or worse?
 * The whole article doesn't seem very clear and a bit rushed.
 * Other things

Simply south not SS, sorry 16:55, 4 January 2009 (UTC)