Talk:Hey You!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:22, 10 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * The single was made available on February 23, 1998 as a CD single in the Netherlands -> The single was released as a CD single
 * in the Netherlands on February 23, 1998.
 * with its lyrically describing -> with its lyrics portraying
 * Unlink CD single


 * Background and release
 * Unlink CD single
 * Try to combine the first two sentences, beginning something like this: "A CD single featuring the album version of..."
 * The CD's cover art is the same used for Tragic Kingdom's fifth single, "Happy Now?" -> The artwork of the release shares the same as used for the fifth single for Tragic Kingdom, "Happy Now?".


 * Composition and music video
 * production done -> production process being handled
 * record"; he discussed -> record". He went on discussing that
 * A studio video -> An accompanying music video
 * Try to reword next sentence
 * Change name of topic in "Composition and promotion"


 * Reception
 * Critical -> Critical response
 * upon release -> upon its release
 * Commercial -> Commercial performance
 * You may leave the charting part, as it's too short


 * Release history
 * Unlink "CD"


 * Outcome: On hold for seven days. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:31, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Again, thanks for the review. I completed my changes. I would like to collaborate with with on "Heaven", but it seems as if we're having some difficulties with some other users. Anyway, thanks for the review. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 00:23, 14 June 2016 (UTC).
 * Passing article! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:41, 14 June 2016 (UTC)