Talk:Hierarchy of oppression

Hi, I added a few templates to this article, because while it is an important topic, and appears to be well-researched and well-written, it does not quite fit Wikipedia standards and sounds more like an opinion essay than an encyclopedia article.

Some of the things that I feel need to be cleaned up:
 * more wikilinking
 * remove weasel words ("some say that... others would argue..." and so on)
 * proper citation of sources
 * trimming of large quote at the end; a text that is 1/3 quote doesn't really make a good article
 * remove original research; statements must be backed up

Thanks to anyone who feels like jumping in and fixing these things, romarin [talk ]  22:13, 29 July 2007 (UTC)

Maybe the article should be deleted, or folded into oppression? -Kris Schnee 15:03, 1 October 2007 (UTC)