Talk:High School Musical: The Musical: The Series/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 13:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Per the template, genres need sources.
 * The "list_episodes" parameter is unnecessary per infobox television.
 * Runtime also needs a source.
 * In the lead, add a serial comma after Mark St. Cyr.
 * Also add a serial comma after "ABC".
 * Done. I did my best at sources for the genres and runtime. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Premise / Cast and characters

 * Considering the Casting has become rather complicated with Season 3 I decided to make a Draft:List of High School Musical: The Musical: The Series cast members. Some information may be incorrect or incomplete due to season 4 being still in production. Thoughts?

Episodes

 * "practise" "practice" (consistency with article)
 * "implores for the" "implores the"
 * Remove the commas after "separating" and "romantic moment".
 * There appears to be a word missing between "prevent her overthinking".
 * "The cast discover" "The cast discovers"
 * Per MOS:TVPLOT, plot summaries should be "no more than 200 words per episode"
 * Episode three is at 206 words.
 * Episode seven is at 208 words.
 * Episode ten is at 206 words.
 * Done. All episodes are now under 200 words. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * "which depicted" "that depicted"
 * Remove the comma after "commenced in February 2020".
 * "present day" "present-day"
 * Add a serial comma after Howard Ashman.
 * The quote in the reference after "idea for a series" doesn't seem necessary.
 * The phrase "write drafts of a script" sounds wordy, so try rewording.
 * The last sentence in the second paragraph seems out of place. Try moving it to the first.
 * Done. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * Fix the [better source needed] issue.
 * Add a serial comma after "ABC".
 * "labelled" "labeled"
 * Add a comma after "January 17, 2020" per WP:DATECOMMA.
 * Per WP:TRAILER, #Marketing should not simply list when trailers were released, but reactions people had to them.
 * I have decided to remove the "Marketing" section as I don't believe it is necessary. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Excellent #Critical_response section! Not too many quotes, which passes WP:RECEPTION.
 * Accolades is missing a Artios Awards nomination.
 * Also, shouldn't the nominees column be after "category"?
 * Wow, thanks for the feedback! Usually my "Critical response" section isn't up to scratch. Thanks for finding the nomination, fixed. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Response

 * Addressing suggestions now. SatDis (talk) 00:49, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
 * All suggestions addressed above. Thanks so much for the review. Please let me know if there are any further suggestions. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)