Talk:High Seas Fleet/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:49, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Do my changes fix the problems? As for the one "why" tag, that is actually a big question. Scheer said he thought the first time the fleets came together went well and wanted to make a second attack, to inflict further damage and to keep Jellicoe guessing. Many think he was covering his arse for making a terrible decision and simply didn't know where Jellicoe was. Parsecboy (talk) 18:49, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 18:49, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Added. Parsecboy (talk) 18:49, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * B. Focused:
 * Is that really necessary? I've seen it argued by several people at various FACs/ACRs (I know Ed dealt with this on one of his South American BBs) that the lang template was superfluous (i.e., anyone reading an article about a topic from country "y" can be reasonably trusted to assume the translation is from the language of country "y"). Parsecboy (talk) 18:49, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail: