Talk:Hilary Duff/Archive 2

Hilary Duff UK site
www.hilaryduff.co.uk is registered to an individual "Mike Peacey" www.hilaryduffoffical.co.uk is the official site. - Can they use www.hilaryduff.co.uk —Preceding unsigned comment added by Dietcokewithcherry (talk • contribs) 13:34, August 29, 2007 (UTC)

Personal Life
Many news stories and interviews even one with video shows Hilary talking about how her parents have separated due to her fathers infidelity with another woman. Is this worth noting in her personal life section?? 02:16, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

I think it is

5 Singles!
Hey guys, I honestly think that whole Martha McPhee thing was a dud. Go and Google "Ebiz Entertainment" and see what you get. Let's look at the forum source closely.

"Hollywood Records is planning to release about 5 singles from Duff's next compilation, out of which the second single has already come out, and the first one (With Love) has been previewed on national television."

What is the supposed second single? I thought it is With Love. And the link to the website does not work. Take a look at this line.

"Don't use this article on your website, please."

The author is obviously afraid that this info he may have made up could be fake! —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Ashuduff (talk • contribs) 13:17, 3 February 2007 (UTC).

Too bad her music sounds so artficial. There is no difference between listening to computer created sound effects and her music.

Hilary Duff and Lip syncing
She's been lip-synching for her entire career

How would you know? Do you even know her? and do you have a reliable source? I don't think you do.

What are you 5? Can't you take any hints from her digitally-enhanced voice? Can a normal human voice sound like that "live"? I don't think so. The evidence speaks for itself. Look under "Lip-Synching on MTV's New Year's Bash" and "Lip-Synching on 2003 AMAs and 2006 AMAs" Hilary's been lip-synching for quite a long time, her voice coach even admitted on E! that she used background music to carry out her live performances. Her fans even admit that her music is ELECTRONIC, you don't think she uses synthesizers and today's latest technology to make her voice sound better? Her songs are polished to the point where its impossible to perform live

So! She still doesn't lip synch. And maybe Hilary Duff is a really good singer live, can't you accept the fact that she is a great singer. The only time I know when she didn't sing is in The Lizzie McGuire Movie, when her voice was combined with another. She was only accused of lip synching, and the person who told that rumor had an incorrect thought, not a fact.

Wrong. She is a professional lip-syncher. She hardly performs any live performances without the assistance of background music. If your reading comprehension isn't so good, I suggest you to re-read what I posted a couple of more times before commenting back. Its a fact that she lip-synched on MTV's New Years Bash and its a fact that she lip-synched during the 2003 AMAs and 2006 AMAs. I would not be posting if these events never happened. Hilary's music is DIGITAL what does that mean? It means a computer did it for her.

You do not have PROOF for you theory. If you have ACTUAL PROOF, I would believe you. So, to make others believe this theory, please have PROOF. And proof is actually Hilary saying that she has been lip syching. Hiary has in fact been caught lip-syncing 17 times. She states that she had a sore throat, but you be the judge.


 * The absence of evidence is not the evidence of absence. In other words, just because something has yet to be proven, doesn't mean it's not true. Of course, I'm media-retarded at times, so my argument is kinda invalid. 65.96.144.190 08:59, 18 June 2007 (UTC)

LOTS of singers use background music. Background music doesn't equal lip-synching, electronic music doesn't equal lip synching. Learn what you're talking about before you comment RoyDMylote 01:23, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

When was this discussion created? New discussions should be at the bottom.... Anywayz, I think that any legit statements on her lipsynching (or not) should be noted in the article. I know she said in an article that she never did, and I know about the MTV New Year's thing, and both are notable.... But at the same time, I don't think anyone wants an edit war, so.... SKS2K6 01:53, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

I don't think she has been lip syching ALL her life


 * She hasn't been lipsynching at all. I went and saw her live twice, and her words and her mouth went together perfectly. Besides that, her voice in song sounds just like I've always heard it on TV and in movies. She's not Lindsay Lohan or Ashlee Simpson, so don't get it twisted. Bigman17 05:13, 18 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Not sure about Ashlee Simpson, but Lindsay Lohan has had more live performances than Hilary Duff (on television, at least; she sounds mediocre live, by the way). Most of Hilary's TV performances are clearly lip-synched. Which doesn't mean that she can't sing live or that she doesn't have true live performances (I guess she sang With Love live on Good Morning America - and it sounded really worse than what you hear on CD), but she does lip-synch a lot.

Note: a theory has been proven. a conjecture has not been proven.66.213.29.242 13:28, 3 April 2007 (UTC)

I don't believe that she lip sings. She has a good voice. The only time she had to lip sign was when she was in The Lizzie McGuire Movie.--SimplePlan4ever89 06:34, 15 August 2007 (UTC)

It has been confirmed that Hilary lip-synched during some of the live performances for her first album - Metamorphosis - because there was a lot of jumping around to do. However, she has gone for vocal lessons to strengthen her voice after that and so now does not lip synch, even on her latest tour.Ruwanshaun (talk) 11:28, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

Stuff by Hilary Duff
Should we have a separate topic for her clothing line?

I SaY YES

Great can someone take care of that? 68.122.145.77 21:47, 26 November 2006 (UTC)

Anyone?????????????????????????

I want to, I know quite a lot about Stuff By Hilary Duff. Luv HilDuff 13:43, 23 December 2006 (UTC)

coolio, start one then!

I think it would be a good idea. I mean it is a big topic.

yes, it would be a good idea... 70.73.118.70 16:28, 19 March 2007 (UTC)

Middle Name
What exactly is Duff's middle name. several sources say Erhard something, BUT, in a program from her most wanted tour, Duff's mother declared that it was Ann.Kiwidude 16:42, September 3, 2005 (UTC)

I'm guessing it would be Erhard if her actual mother said so. She did after all name Hilary. Although I always thought it was Ann you never know!

It's definitely Erhard... says it in the Most Wanted tour program on a page written by her mom, Susan Duff.


 * How about Hilary Ann Erhard Duff? Hilary is her first name, Ann is her secondary name, Erhard is the middle name and Duff is the surname. --Howard the Duck | talk, 05:50, 14 May 2006 (UTC)

What the hell is Erhard?????? Her middle name is Ann!!!!!!!!!! Somebody PLEASE change it!!!!!!


 * If you can come up with a reliable citation that contradicts the current reliable citation we have and that states this is what her name is. This is unlikely, however.  --Yamla 14:11, 14 May 2006 (UTC)

On this website alot of people are agreeing its "Erhard", http://www.forum.juicyduff.com/showthread.php?t=855. 70.73.118.70 16:32, 19 March 2007 (UTC)

You guys should put it as Hilary Ann Erhard Duff

On her Dignity cd, the deluxe edition DVD, she says it's Erhard after her grandmother. The English translation of Erhard is Ann.Ruwanshaun (talk) 11:29, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

The sprotected2 tag
An admin took it off, so it's currently inactive, even though someone reinserted the tag (if you couldn't tell by the amount of IP edits this page has had in the past 24 hours). I'm gonna take it off now, since it's doing absolutely nothing other than putting an icon in the top left corner. SKS2K6 06:33, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

The Hulk Nickname
I took it off. But there's still a paragragh on it. Is it really true and is there any information to verify it? I have never heard it - .* this message from natasha 09:31, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

New image
I have repeatedly told the user that fair use images are not allowed, but he repeatedly ignores me. And I can't revert, cuz then I'm violating WP:3RR. Can someone change the picture back to the free one? Thanks. And if someone else can explain the fair use criteria, I'd be greatly appreciated. SKS2K6 02:21, 9 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Fair use is explained here: WP:FUC.  Rklawton 16:59, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Ok, we really need a new picture
I know wikipedia accepts pictures that are like government ones...like the one right now 'american supports...blah blah blah.'

Well, Hilary performed for the President inaugeration or whatever...if anyone rememebers it was in 2005 and she performed wake up....if we get that picture of her performing, it would work...but i just cant find it!!

HELP PLEASE!! —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Maahem33 (talk • contribs) 06:41, 19 January 2007 (UTC).
 * I have one of her performing in Columbus, Ohio. I will upload and change it. Imageboy1 01:03, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
 * lololol she looks too thin TheKillerAngel 18:48, 22 January 2007 (UTC)

In "Movies" section
I think someone needs to edit or add a statement. The article states that A Cinderella Story made about 74,000,000, then it goes on saying that critics panned the movie, with one critic stating RAISE YOUR VOICE was bad...Was there a statement about Raise Your Voice in between there that was deleted? Small5th 05:13, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Hilary Duff
Hilary Duffs middle name is actually Ann. I met her and asked her it is for sure Ann. So can you please change it? Thank you very much indeed. Teddsy28

Where's your source? You can't just SAY that and expect us to believe you. You need proof sweety

Ebiz.
http://www.ebizentertainementnews.co...dex/news.shtml IS A FAKE SITE. Please remove this link, and all the info from this link, to avoid confusion. Thanks. :)

Middle name.
Due to the dispute of her name, Wikipedia should not allow her name to be displayed with certainty, instead they should put, "Erhard or Ann (Name disputed)." Merlot70 05:35, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
 * not really, because that's her name. It just is, Bigman17 05:15, 18 March 2007 (UTC)

add www.hilaryplanet.com to external links
add www.hilaryplanet.com to external links —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 203.129.151.204 (talk) 07:58, 12 February 2007 (UTC).
 * Sorry, no fan sites. --  Zanimum 19:33, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

removed ebiz
I've removed the information that came from the fake Ebiz site. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Sailorearth (talk • contribs) 07:31, 15 February 2007 (UTC).

Awards and Nominations
Can someone put a FULL list of Hilary's awards and nomtations on her page. I'm talking about everything from her music and film career.

AveryStepfon 00:32, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

First Paragraph
I think the first paragraph (introduction) should include information about Stuff by Hilary Duff considering it is her clothing line. That way it will cover all Hilary's repertoire (ie. music, film, fashion etc)

Tipexcom2 17:58, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

Vandilism
I've noticed that in the recent changes, someone changed it- So I clicked, and it was vandilised. As a newly registered user, could someone else revert the vandilism? Thanks in advance --Goberfish 02:18, 27 February 2007 (UTC)

Hilary Duff has also stard in sims2 pets PC with her dog Lola. She said...

"It's so exciting! i'm not normally into video games but about five years ago I was over at a friends house and started playing a sims game. You can build houses and build the charecters, fight or fall in love. I've been obsesed! When they asked to do a charecter of me i was like "that's awsome". Then they said they were doing about dogs, and gave my dog, Lola,a charecter too. I was part of a process - designing what it looked like, what lola looked like and the tricks she does. It's so interesting, but i don't this Lola pays attention."

Dignity Reached Number 4!!!!!!
Hilary's new album debuted and peaked at number 4.Then why all over her Wikipedia article is it saying 3.This is incorrect and I have changed it twice already and someone is changing it back.Go to www.billboard.com right now and you will see it is at number four with a peak at number. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 86.42.8.35 (talk) 20:55, 14 April 2007 (UTC). I don't think i have to say that the song made it to number 3 now, it was a mistake the album sold a little more than a thousand than martina mcbride

It debuted at Billboard at number 3. Read Billboard properly.Ruwanshaun (talk) 11:30, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

With Love
Hilary Duff new fragerance With Love was named a best-selling fragerance,

Hilary duff won the World Music Award for Best New Female Artist 2004 CHECK HERE www.turkishdailynews.com.tr/archives.php?id=37693 - 40k - Cached - Similar pages
Yeah, she did...it used to be here before butsomeone fixed it and probably forgot to type it out again...and her dignity album was at number 3

NOT 4 it was a mistake, even billboard said it....

she has been singing for so long and she is considered a new artist????
 * Which year has she won anything at the World Music Awards?? Unless you can prove it, there's no way to state she ever get this award...


 * She's considered an artist?! What has the world become? Slartibartfast1992 22:41, 5 June 2007 (UTC)

yeah..in 2004...she won for metamorphosis..and if you go click on metamorphosis (the album) it states there that she won wma...but if u go to the site it appears to be unable to be entered..so yeah!!!!


 * I didn't understand a word of that but I still think she has the artistic talent of a toaster. Slartibartfast ( 19 92 ) 02:30, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

New Films
Duff will have two new films Greta, and Safety Glass

Awards
Awards should probably be reorganized, maybe by date. 205.250.117.181 07:16, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

Please someone put her full list of awards n nominations
First,her world music award 2004 is nowhere 2 be found,if u type in duff world music award 2004 on google u'll get ths site called turkishdaily somethng,n listed wud b a full list of 2004 winners n hilary won the best female artist!

Filmography
where's her filmography section?

Deano91 03:54, 30 June 2007 (UTC)

This article has been raped by vandals
lol everything past Personal Life is gone. 69.138.188.200 14:28, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I wasn't signed in when I said that. I'll fix it up. TheKillerAngel 14:33, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

GA nomination
I have nominated this article for GA, if any there is any issues with it, please reply it here or on my talk page and mentionning what can be improved. This is the first time I have nominated an article for GA, but article looks well written with several sources. I had fix some of the reference format so it can be more presentable and comply with the style--JForget 01:10, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

GA review comments
I'd like to let you know I'm reviewing this article for Good Article status, my comments follow: This is close to failing (mainly due to the lack of reliable sources, especially due to the broken [4]), but I'll put it on hold for now. Seven days max to fix these issues. Let me know if I can help with anything. The Rambling Man 17:48, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Avoid external links within the prose - so the link after "...Amy Beulah Schlemmer [1]..." should be made into a genuine citation per WP:CITE.
 * "(Susan and Bob separated in 2006.)[3]" - weird parenthesised, short sentence.
 * "theatre" vs "theater". Consistency required.
 * Deal with any [citation needed] tags.
 * Ensure all Fair Use rationales actually specify for which articles the fair use is valid.
 * Citation ref [4] (used throughout) is dead. Need a new link or a new reference for all uses.
 * A number of paragraphs are completely uncited, this needs to be resolved.
 * Place citations in accordance with WP:CITE (e.g. [6],[7],[8],[9]).
 * Razzie? Wikilink or explain.
 * "Duff recorded a cover of Brooke McClymont's "I Can't Wait" for the original television soundtrack for Lizzie McGuire in 2002 (see Lizzie McGuire (soundtrack)), and "The Tiki Tiki Tiki Room" for the first DisneyMania compilation album." - just pipe a wikilink on the first soundtrack to Lizzie McGuire (soundtrack) and remove the nasty "see...." bit. Certainly don't say "see... " twice, yuck.
 * Avoid single-sentence paragraphs, e.g. "Duff recorded new songs for her Madonna-produced film Material Girls, including a Timbaland-produced cover version of Madonna's "Material Girl" with her sister.[19]"
 * Entrepreneurship section needs to be converted to better prose, it's borderline lineprose.
 * Cite the very specific gross for Human Nature.

album sales
Any good place to find out her record sales besides nielson, especially for dignity.

Amy Beulah Schlemmer
Did anyone found another source (other then apparently the fansite mentionned by another editor) for the German ancestry which is tag for a citation request? There is only 2 days left for the GA nomination and it was one of the issues mentionned (not the first point but where the reviewer mentionned that we need to deal with any citation needed passages).JForget 23:09, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

Personal Life
In the Personal life section it says that Hilary had a miscarriage with Joels baby which is why they brokeup. As far as I know thats not true, someone should delete it.

SOMEONE DELETE THE 'SKANK OF THE YEAR AWARD FROM ROLLING STONE'
It's supposed to be the teenager of the year award...people why do u got to be jealous of her that you just call her a skank...Friggin a-hole...and her album discography is all wrong..she doesnt have number one albums in uk.... —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 61.6.202.127 (talk • contribs).
 * Done.--JYi 06:37, 12 August 2007 (UTC)

tHANKS JYi, now could u insert the worldwide chart deatils for hilary's albums according to the united world chart because her most wanted was no. 1 and dignity was no. 2 according to media traffic....Thanks —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Aloof47 (talk • contribs).
 * I'd prefer to leave that information out of the main page. All the chart details are already at Hilary Duff discography. --JYi 19:14, 12 August 2007 (UTC)

yeah but if its alright with u could u just add them to the discography page..thanks alot mate

Talk Page Vandalism
I noticed that there is lots of vandalism and unsigned posts on this talk page. Can we start getting this all cleaned up? Haseo9999 14:39, 8 September 2007 (UTC)

Too many images
As of this posting, is 9 images really necessary for the article? We can cut a few. TheKillerAngel 00:59, 1 October 2007 (UTC)

GA renomination
I think this article deserves to be a GA. i want to know what others think of it....also should i submit the article for reassessment or renomination??.....if anything needs to be done pls suggest....i think it can be submitted for GA nomination.Gprince007 15:05, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
 * I've renominated this article for GA status. Lets hope it passes thru and attains GA status.Gprince007 15:31, 30 October 2007 (UTC)

GAN Review: On Hold
I have reviewed this article according to the requirements of the GA criteria and have put the article on hold at this time until the following issues are addressed:
 * 1) "She has an elder sister, Haylie Duff, who is also an actress/singer." This sentence doesn't need to be mentioned right away in the first paragraph on an article about Hilary Duff. Move it down further into the intro and put another sentence stating something notable about Hilary's life instead.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) "Duff's latest studio album, Dignity,was released in April 2007, has been certified Gold, and has sold almost 870,000 worldwide since then." Add a space after the comma after Dignity. Also gold, doesn't have to be capitalized.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) Explain further why "...the plans failed to take off."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) "During her time on Lizzie McGuire, Duff starred opposite Christy Carlson Romano and Gary Cole in the Disney Channel television film Cadet Kelly (2002), which became the network's most watched program in its nineteen-year history." Single sentence shouldn't stand alone, so either expand on it (maybe a very brief mention of her role in the film), or incorporate it into another paragraph. Go through the rest of the article and fix any other occurrences if applicable.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) "...she later reappeared in the show in 2005 as a feminist poet friend of Carmen (Masiela Lusha)." Add "the character" Carmen.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) "In January 2007, Hilary launched The Hilary Duff Podcast on Switchpod.com. Subscribers can access behind-the-scenes footage of Hilary and her band rehearsing. A few select users also get to access pre-concert sound checks, and watch footage of rare performances. They also get a sneak peek of fashion fittings, magazine photo shoots and fashion events, as well as learn more about the charities and causes close to Hilary's heart." This really needs to be reworded and sourced, it currently sounds like an advertisement. If you don't think it to be notable, I'd recommend removing it. Statements like "close to Hilary's heart" are not encyclopedic.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) "Duff received her first Razzie nomination for worst actress for her roles in Raise Your Voice and Cinderella Story" Remove the extra ' after Cinderella Story.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) "Duff is currently slated to star opposite John Cusack in War, Inc., due for release in July, 2008." Remove the comma between July and 2008.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) "On September 7, 2007, Duff confirmed on Much On Demand, that she would be filming two films from September through October. The films will be called Greta, and Safety Glass." Add wiklinks for the full date, and reword the last sentence to "The films will be called Greta and Safety Glass, respectively."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) "In 2007, the internet website Stardoll.com featured Duff's clothing line on the website where players will get the opportunity to dress up any paper doll (which include Hilary Duff's own doll) with the clothes. This will enable them to preview the clothes before purchasing." This sounds like advertising, and not really notable, so I'd recommend removing it.
 * 11) "Duff premiered it on The View.[36]." Remove the extra period.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) "In console versions of the game, Duff's character visits public areas and allows the players to let their sims socialize with her and Lola, the dog." Sims should be capitalized.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) "Comrie bought Duff a brand new $100,000 car for her 20th birthday.[47]." Remove the extra period.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) If possible, condense down the information about the relationships she had with the three men.
 * 15) "Duff is also involved with various charities, is an animal rights enthusiast and a member of Kids with a Cause.[48] She also donated US$250,000 to help the victims of Hurricane Katrina." Remove also in first sentence since it sounds redundant with the following sentence.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) "Recently, there were reports of drama between the two at a..." Reword to something more encyclopedic, "reports of drama" doesn't work well.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) "In August 2005, Duff said she received veneers because she chipped off one of her front teeth on a microphone during a concert.[57] She subsequently had her veneers redone to match the size of her original teeth.[58][59]" Consider moving this to the personal life section, it doesn't seem to be controversial.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) "Huff, Richard."A very busy Miss 'Lizzie'". Hilary Duff was lesbian when she was 18 years old. New York Daily News. December 1, 2002. Retrieved July 25, 2007." This inline citation looks like vandalism is included, fix if it is.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)

Add inline citations for:
 * 1) "Like Casper: A Spirited Beginning (1997), the second sequel to the successful Casper (1995), the film was released direct-to-video with mostly unenthusiastic reviews." Add an inline citation for the "unenthusiastic reviews" with a few reviews that point that out.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) "Duff was dropped from the cast of Daddio prior to it being aired, which made her reluctant to pursue her acting career further." Did she say she was reluncant? If so, please include an inline citation for this.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 3) "Her participation in the show led to her becoming highly popular among children between the ages of seven and fourteen..." Needs a source for this.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 4) "However, she went on to reprise her role as Lizzie McGuire in the successful feature film spin-off, The Lizzie McGuire Movie in 2003." Instead of successful document whether it did well financially/with critics or both, and cite it.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 5) "Later that year, Duff played one of the twelve children of Steve Martin and Bonnie Hunt in the family film Cheaper by the Dozen, which remains her highest grossing film till date." Need a source for the last part of the sentence. It should also be "to date" instead of "till date".✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 6) "She reprised her role in the sequel to the film called Cheaper by the Dozen 2 (2005), which failed to be as successful as the original film and was panned by critics." Needs source for box office performance, and critics' reviews.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 7) "Though the reviews were mostly negative, the film went on to become a moderate box office hit, and critics were impressed by Duff's performance and her chemistry with co-star Chad Michael Murray." Again, sources needed for impressed critics.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 8) "with the Las Vegas Weekly writing: "Effortlessly combining Duff's bad acting and bad singing with bad writing and bad direction, Raise Your Voice is an insulting waste of time that begs to be silenced"."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 9) "The film received mostly harsh reviews and proved to be a box office disaster, grossing $19,770,475 globally." Don't use disaster unless it was a quote, which in that case, needs "disaster" and citation. Otherwise, use something more neutral.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 10) "The 2006 satirical comedy Material Girls, in which she co-starred with her sister Haylie, was also a major disappointment, grossing only $14,189,525 worldwide." A major disappointment again needs a source, otherwise remove.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 11) Needs inline citation for "Duff sang several tracks for the 2003 soundtrack to The Lizzie McGuire Movie, including "Why Not", which peaked at number fourteen in Australia."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 12) "Duff's second album and first studio album, Metamorphosis (2003), reached number one on the U.S. and Canadian charts."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 13) "and reached the top twenty elsewhere." Where elsewhere? and sources.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 14) "She described the album as having an edgier, rock feel than Metamorphosis."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 15) "Duff stated that it was not a greatest hits album, but that her label told her it was time to release a new album."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 16) "It reached the top five in the U.S. and Canada, the top twenty in Australia and the top forty in the UK." ✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 17) "The single is most likely to be in Dignity 2, the re-release version of the Dignity album which will probably be in the CDVU+ format.[citation needed]" I'd recommend removing the statement since it sounds like OR without a source, and is probably not really notable enough to include in her article.✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 18) "The relationship lasted a year and a half."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 19) ""They quoted Hilary Duff saying, 'Avril needs to appreciate her fans more and blah, blah, blah.' I'm like, excuse me? First off, it's not even true. I never said that. And second, who the hell cares what she has to say about my fans? Whatever. Hilary Duff's such a goody-goody, such a mommy's girl"."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 20) "According to legal papers filed by Duff, Miakovsky came to the U.S. "for the sole purpose of meeting and becoming romantically involved with Ms. Duff"."✅Gprince007 (talk) 06:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)

Altogether, there are a lot of things to fix, but the majority of these should not take very long to correct. I will leave the article on hold for seven days for the above issues to be addressed. When you complete an issue, just strike it out, or put a "done" next to it to help track your progress. If you have any questions about the above issues or when you are done, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Good work so far, and happy editing on improving the article! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 00:37, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
 * I believe i've addressed all issues pertaing to the GAN review. However, certain points couldnt be addressed. The following are the points and the reasons:


 * I didnt change Pt 10 because
 * i believe it is justified to be there because it is stated under "Entrepreneurship" section. The site features Duff's clothing line and dressing up Duff's doll as a preview before buying. Since the site is for selling Duff's branded clothing line, i think it should remain in that section.
 * Pt 14 regarding her relationship with three men: I believe that her personal relationships are condensed enough in 3 short paragraphs. Not to forget, these also include her feud with Lindsay Lohan and comments about virginity. Her relationship with the 3 men ,the Lindsay feud and charity causes together make up the section which i believe is condensed enough.

Apart from these two points, all the points have been addressed and i believe you should not have any problems in promoting it. Thanx to your GAN review, the article now has 88 references as compared to 62 a few days back. If there is any other clarification or issue which needs to be addressed then do let me know....Thanx..Gprince007 (talk) 15:18, 25 November 2007 (UTC)

A few more things
Good work on addressing the above issues, and I apologize for the delay in getting back to rereview the article. I made a few corrections myself, but there are a few more things that need to be fixed further, and once they are addressed, the article shouldn't have a problem passing. These should be easy to fix, and again, let me know on my talk page when you're done. --Nehrams2020 (talk) 07:27, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Image:Posterraisevoice.jpg was added to the article and if it is to be included several things need to be fixed. The image needs to be reduced in size so that the largest size is 300 or 400px, so you can reupload the image after reducing it in an outside computer program and uploading the new version in place of the original by clicking on "Upload a new version of this file" on the image's page (Image:Hilary Duff Metamorphosis.jpg and Image:Hilary Duff Most Wanted.jpg also needs to be reduced) Additionally, a detailed fair use rationale must be added that clearly states why the posters should be included in the article. If you don't want to go through with fixing the three images, then you can just remove them.✅ Gprince007 (talk) 07:47, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) "and reached the top twenty elsewhere." Mention what countries reached the top twenty.✅ Gprince007 (talk) 08:00, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
 * 2) "Duff stated that it was not a greatest hits album, but that her label told her it was time to release a new album." Still needs an inline citation.

GA passed
Since the above issues were addressed for the most part, I have passed this article according to the requirements of the GA criteria. For the third point, I'd recommend stating that she said it on the television show, and then include an inline citation for a television episode, by adding TRL, the year, or any other information you can find. Besides this, the article has greatly improved since the beginning of my review. Keep improving the article, making sure that all new information is properly sourced. Also, to anyone that is reading this review, please consider reviewing an article or two at WP:GAN to help with the large backlog. Instructions can be found here. Keep up the good work, and I hope that you continue to bring articles up to Good Article status. If you have any further questions about this review, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have updated the article history to reflect this review. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 00:11, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

GA passed, Next step FA
well the article is finally a GA rated article now. The next logical step i guess would be to push for FA in the coming weeks. Regarding the points raised while the article was under GA nomination review, all the points have been addressed except for the one described above. Now i am not from US, so i dont know when and at what date Hilary said the above statements on TRL...i know that it was in 2005. if someone knows other details of the show and when she gave the statement then pls cite them in the article. meanwhile, i'll also search the net for the cite...cheers !!! Gprince007 (talk) 07:21, 28 November 2007 (UTC)

KRIV incident
can we please have a mention of a incident involving Hilary, her sister Haylie, their mom and the Fox station from their hometown Houston KRIV. this incident happened while the group was leaving the Harris County Courthouse in Houston. the incident which resulted with a damage camera that belonged to KRIV (similar to the Kenny Rogers (the baseball player) attack of the DFW media that happened in 2005 at Rangers Ballpark in Arlington with KRIV's sister station KDFW, which had a camera destroyed and a camera man injured in the incident) and has footage of the incident which included Haylie screaming the word "Fuck". here's the link to the story to prove that isn't a tabloid story: http://www.myfoxhouston.com/myfox/pages/Entertainment/Detail?contentId=5279500&version=4&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=7.2.1

this incident should be mention here on her wikipedia--Boutitbenza 69 9 (talk) 07:33, 22 December 2007 (UTC)