Talk:Hilbert High School

Problems with article
The article is POV and written in a non-encyclopaedic tone. (i.e. "To insure that our students receive the highest quality education.) The list of information needs to either be incorporated into prose or put into an infobox. (I'd go for the latter.) A good portion of the text is handwaving that doesn't belong in an article about a specific high school(i.e. "The main purpose for attending school..."). Maybe the cleanup tag wasn't the most appropriate, but I though it was necessary to mark somehow. I would fix it but I have a paper to write today. --Gimme danger 12:03, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
 * You're right it was bad - I must have only read the good parts. I cleaned it up. The cleanup tag was appropriate. Royal broil  13:14, 8 June 2007 (UTC)